Moving forward, did about 450ish
Mar. 22nd, 2012 12:22 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
I have the last bit mapped out by action. John does this, then Sherlock does this and then John does this .... until the end. I am crossing off all the actions as I go. 22 actions noted, and I've done 11 (Woot!) I might actually finish draft one by Friday!!?? maybe?
I feel good about the ending now, now that I have this tight outline of what needs to get done I can write with some purpose. Got me some John angst headspace action which is good as now I can have Sherlock guide the story to the end.
I'm glad I got to keep the harsh exchange in (Sherlock deducing the fuck out of John...), though I need to get Sherlock's deduction voice down for that to work, I should probably watch some rapid fire BBC deduction scenes to get the cadence down... ugh, research.... Ah, and I can throw in some voice kink... yes that will work.
Wrote most of tonight's bits this to Mushtaq and Terry Hall's They Gotta Quit Kicking my Dog Around, (not to be mistaken by the ole timey classic of the same name!) which I think made it more heated, might have been that flamenco edge, seven count rhythm and the mad Polish gypsy choir! I've been listening to that song non-stop for about a day. I had to tone it down with some Cinematic Orchestra... always good.
Can you actually eat too many Ricola cough drops? I think one of my teeth is going to explode. I may have pushed the limit on this one. I think I have allergies...
Oh I can't wait to finish this fucking thing and start editing, I so want to edit this thing! I think blogging right after I finish writing helps me to decompress from all the wording. It feels good to just be like BLEEEEGGGGGH on page instead of thinking about the words all careful like...